authorial intrusion

Writer interrupts story

Authorial intrusion is a narrative technique in which a writer steps outside the story to address readers directly, offering commentary, opinions, or explanations that break the fictional frame.

Victorian novelists like Dickens and Thackeray used it freely, pausing their tales to moralize or confide in readers.

Modern fiction generally avoids it, favoring more seamless immersion, though some contemporary writers employ it for ironic or postmodern effect.

Opposites
narrative presence

authorial intrusionself-effacement

Downplaying one's importance

narrative control

authorial intrusioninterior monologue

Character's private thoughts narrated

stream of consciousness · dramatic irony

showing vs. telling

authorial intrusionshowing

Presenting for others

dramatization · implication · subtext

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author, authorial, authors, authored, authoring, authorship, authority, authorities, authoritative

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